‘Tis the season to be creepy, Mwua ha ha ha ha, ha ha ha ha! Watch your back when you go sleepy, Mwua ha ha ha ha, ha ha ha ha! Fangs and claws all I see, Mwua ha ha ha ha, ha ha ha ha! Just look at that blood pooled beneath the tree, Mwua ha ha ha haaaa, ha ha ha haaaaa!”
Grade - (F) REDO: good prose, well written, good imagination, but clearly your antics can’t be real - I don’t allow fibs in my class, Mr. Lio. Keep trying until you can write about your REAL “summer adventures.” (tsk, tsk)
Oy, that last panel makes me laugh so hard that both my eyes scream! ba dum dum [crash]