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![9 Chickweed Lane](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/cw/small_u-201701251613.png)
9 Chickweed Lane
By Brooke McEldowney![Pibgorn](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/pib/small_u-201701251611.png)
Pibgorn
By Brooke McEldowney![Angry Little Girls](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/ag/small_u-201701251614.png)
Angry Little Girls
By Lela Lee![Lay Lines](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/lli/small_u-201701251615.png)
Lay Lines
By Carol Lay![On A Claire Day](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/crocd/small_u-201701251612.png)
On A Claire Day
By Carla Ventresca and Henry Beckett![Pickles](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/wppic/small_u-201701251611.png)
Pickles
By Brian Crane![Stone Soup](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/ssc/small_ssc_u_202406241242.png)
Stone Soup
By Jan Eliot![Working Daze](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/wd/small_u-201701251614.png)
Working Daze
By John Zakour and Scott Roberts![For Better or For Worse](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/fb/small_u-201701251612.png)
For Better or For Worse
By Lynn Johnston![The Buckets](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/bu/small_u-201701251613.png)
The Buckets
By Greg Cravens![B.C.](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/crbc/small_u-201701251612.png)
B.C.
By Mastroianni and Hart![Betty](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/bt/small_u-201701251613.png)
Betty
By Gary Delainey and Gerry Rasmussen![Dog Eat Doug](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/crdog/small_crdog_u_202007011011.png)
Dog Eat Doug
By Brian Anderson![Frazz](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/fz/small_u-201701251613.png)
Frazz
By Jef Mallett![JumpStart](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/jt/small_u-201701251613.png)
JumpStart
By Robb Armstrong![Luann](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/lu/small_lu_u_201803261056.png)
Luann
By Greg Evans and Karen Evans![Over the Hedge](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/oh/small_u-201701251613.png)
Over the Hedge
By T Lewis and Michael Fry![Ripley's Believe It or Not](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/rp/small_rp_u_202212280802.png)
Ripley's Believe It or Not
By Ripley’s Believe It or Not!![The Humble Stumble](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/hu/small_u-201701251614.png)
The Humble Stumble
By Roy Schneider![Ginger Meggs](https://avatar.amuniversal.com/feature_avatars/ubadge_images/features/gin/small_u-201701251611.png)
Convoluted writing distracts from the message. I have read a variety of genres over the years, everything from youth novels to research papers. Often the more complex writing styles were accompanied by a reduced amount of information.
Peer to peer highly technical research is excluded, but I don’t think that is what he is writing. If he is more focused on content, then he should consider it the rough draft. Polishing the final draft is when you focus on making sure the audience actually hears what you want to say.
Otherwise, why bother trying to communicate?