“On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, the ape-man dropped, exhausted, from his horse.”
That’s an awkwardly constructed sentence. Better options would be: “On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, exhausted, the ape-man dropped from his horse.”
or: “On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, the ape-man dropped from his horse, exhausted.”
or the best version: “On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, the exhausted ape-man dropped from his horse.”
By the time of Julius Caesar, the Roman constitution was in desperate need of reform due to the nation’s schizophrenic aims. Rome wanted to be a city-state AND a Mediterranean spanning empire. The old political structure was inadequate for running the latter.
“On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, the ape-man dropped, exhausted, from his horse.”
That’s an awkwardly constructed sentence. Better options would be: “On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, exhausted, the ape-man dropped from his horse.”
or: “On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, the ape-man dropped from his horse, exhausted.”
or the best version: “On the rock-strewn grassy plain beyond, the exhausted ape-man dropped from his horse.”