Leave panels 1 and 3 as is – - panel 2 could have been a close-up of the side of Sluggo’s head, jabbed by Nancy’s word balloon. What’s the real emphasis of the gag, Sluggo’s head jabbed or Nancy’s word balloon?
Most of us spend 12 years learning a public-oriented education, and then spend the rest of our lives unlearning many of the same things – - these comments may be a result of that unlearning.
Spare dialogue for Nancy, usually. All medium shots, the eye tracks across the panels in this strip with no interruption where there doesn’t need to be an interruption or close-up or wide establishing shot…
Leave panels 1 and 3 as is – - panel 2 could have been a close-up of the side of Sluggo’s head, jabbed by Nancy’s word balloon. What’s the real emphasis of the gag, Sluggo’s head jabbed or Nancy’s word balloon?