Cleats by Bill Hinds for November 13, 2024
Transcript:
Mondo: What did you think about my rewrite, Tuan? Boy: Mondo, do you have a personal interest in your subject? Mondo: Abby Harper? Are you kidding? What makes you think that? Boy: That last line, "Abby Harper, I get a kick out of you." Mondo: I was just trying to give the reader a feeling of what it was like to be there. Boy: See if you can make it seem like the reader is there but you are not.
markkahler52 12 days ago
No, leave it just like that! It’s “Honest…”
Ellis97 12 days ago
It’s pretty much the only way that Mondo can express his eternal love for Abby.
DaBump Premium Member 12 days ago
Ah, the editor: much-overlooked hero of so much literature!