He’s not wrong.
I like this haiku by Bashou:
In the realm of death
The flower of love comes out,
A single lily.
I’ve heard worse.
Japanese torture that is. Same with the flamin’ squares with numbers that all add up. If I had that much time on my hands I’d get a job.
It seems more of a Lowku.
Nope; it’s missing the kigo….
good stab at your first attempt at a haiku …
Best seller no doubt
Next time I try to remember the structure of a Haiku, I’ll remember this.
Poems were not met to be technical. Manuals were met to be technical.
" …haiku…" “Gesundheit. "
Two days in a rowI can barely load comics.Anyone know what’s up?
Suppose it is better than a limerick: “There once was a cat named Bucky . . . .”
And, of course, the “four” represents the four seasons.
I had problems yesterday but today’s fine
I never do.
The syllabification is off by one. It should be 5, 7, 5 for a classic haiku. Either that or I’m to old to count accurately! :-)
Nicely done, Satchel!
Your haiku is impressive.
Keep it up, buddy.
onespiceybbw over 3 years ago
He’s not wrong.
Johnny Q Premium Member over 3 years ago
I like this haiku by Bashou:
In the realm of death
The flower of love comes out,
A single lily.
RLG Premium Member over 3 years ago
I’ve heard worse.
Jayalexander over 3 years ago
Japanese torture that is. Same with the flamin’ squares with numbers that all add up. If I had that much time on my hands I’d get a job.
Sanspareil over 3 years ago
It seems more of a Lowku.
Gandalf over 3 years ago
Nope; it’s missing the kigo….
gmu328 over 3 years ago
good stab at your first attempt at a haiku …
diskus Premium Member over 3 years ago
Best seller no doubt
Ichabod Ferguson over 3 years ago
Next time I try to remember the structure of a Haiku, I’ll remember this.
cubswin2016 over 3 years ago
Poems were not met to be technical. Manuals were met to be technical.
bobpeters61 over 3 years ago
" …haiku…" “Gesundheit. "
MitmanArt over 3 years ago
Two days in a rowI can barely load comics.Anyone know what’s up?
GatorStreet over 3 years ago
Suppose it is better than a limerick: “There once was a cat named Bucky . . . .”
mistercatworks over 3 years ago
And, of course, the “four” represents the four seasons.
VickiP123 over 3 years ago
I had problems yesterday but today’s fine
WilliamDoerfler over 3 years ago
I never do.
Kind&Kinder over 3 years ago
The syllabification is off by one. It should be 5, 7, 5 for a classic haiku. Either that or I’m to old to count accurately! :-)
rgcviper over 3 years ago
Nicely done, Satchel!
Your haiku is impressive.
Keep it up, buddy.