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No cadence at all. The rhythm reminds me of Steve Martin in the JERK.
Let me help here…
“Why do birds suddenly appear,
everytime my car is near.
Just like you, they long to poo,
close to you….”
Had he done it this way, it would have been funny.
margueritem about 16 years ago
Just like me, they long to be close to you…. Actually, they long to make their marks on your freshly washed baby.
Digital Frog about 16 years ago
doctortoon says: OK, who else had to sing it to make check the cadence worked?
LOL - only in my head… and it’s not - he needs to drop “the” in the 3rd line or contract suddenly to 2 syllables (sudd’nly).
…Unlike me, they like to see, well dropped poo….
jondelfin Premium Member about 16 years ago
Hal David gets no respect…. (insert story about Mrs. Kern, Mrs. Hammerstein and “Ol’ Man River”)
eardroppings about 16 years ago
No cadence at all. The rhythm reminds me of Steve Martin in the JERK. Let me help here… “Why do birds suddenly appear, everytime my car is near. Just like you, they long to poo, close to you….” Had he done it this way, it would have been funny.
terrencestamp90346 about 16 years ago
Delightfully nuanced. I read it as he’s only been inspired … he hasn’t perfected it yet.
Alas, perhaps I think too much. I have been guilty before.
calvinandquestionmark about 16 years ago
Eardrops… That’s pretty funny!