1. I would have lead with a joke that was not so anachronistic. Or are maxi coats a thing again? 2. Whatever that font they’re using has to be changed. it looks woefully amateurish. Just a step above COMIC SANS. 3. Don’t forget to edit — I’ll (add apostrophe)
Welcome to Emmy Lou. A few points.
1. I would have lead with a joke that was not so anachronistic. Or are maxi coats a thing again? 2. Whatever that font they’re using has to be changed. it looks woefully amateurish. Just a step above COMIC SANS. 3. Don’t forget to edit — I’ll (add apostrophe)