1. “chomp, chomp, crack” From the “chomp” I get that the stylist is eating something, but what does “crack” mean? Did she crack a tooth or a filling?
2. If Elly Patterson is looking for a significant change in her hairstyle, why would she be going to a stylist she does not know, who appears to be incompetent and just a little sleazy? Wouldn’t Elly just go to the person she knows who usually cuts her hair?
A few comments:
1. “chomp, chomp, crack” From the “chomp” I get that the stylist is eating something, but what does “crack” mean? Did she crack a tooth or a filling?
2. If Elly Patterson is looking for a significant change in her hairstyle, why would she be going to a stylist she does not know, who appears to be incompetent and just a little sleazy? Wouldn’t Elly just go to the person she knows who usually cuts her hair?