JumpStart by Robb Armstrong for February 20, 2016

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    Tue Elung-Jensen  almost 9 years ago

    Really dont see why he should care about his father. he did leave until now after all.

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    Mopar_Mike  almost 9 years ago

    If we are to accept Ray has reformed, then Ray needs to accept that his father has, too.

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    robbarmstrong Premium Member almost 9 years ago

    This was tricky. How do I depict a death in the strip without making JumpStart morose for a day? Well, in an earlier draft, Marcy is quietly saying,“Oh no” into the telephone. It communicated very well that the patient died, but I just felt it was a bit too strong for my younger readers ( and even older readers who just want to enjoy their morning Cheerios without being reminded of the brevity and fragility of human life) So, I removed the word “Oh”, and retained the “NO”, making it bigger and bolder. I created a double meaning with it: Marcy is answering Ray’s question about the dog, AND reacting to sad news. It missed. Ray’s dad did not make it. Cue up " Taps".

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    David Huie Green LoveJoyAndPeace  almost 9 years ago

    @Phatts California@robb armstrong“YOU JUST GAVE IT AWAY, ROBB!!”.

    He MEANT to give it away, the fact Ray’s father died.If you read this as a thriller or mystery, that would be unpleasant.As life in pieces, it is very well done. He captured humanity others miss.

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    David Huie Green LoveJoyAndPeace  almost 9 years ago

    So many around us we never realize have depths unimagined.Usually even after they die.Every loss a tragedy.I have a friend who is now showing signs of Alzheimer’s.He pumps diesel fuel.His assets were in the low millions, may still be. He never discussed real estate transactions with me, I just happen to know of a couple over a million dollars each.He discusses his granddaughters mostly.Some days he tells of flying bombers over Eastern Europe in WW2.

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