crunchy:
Its my sister, Ruth.
Joe: All the way from Bora Bora
Hey sis! you back in the states?
Your husband has been here of months? No! He never called me!
@amaryllis2 I attempted to make it visually clear that Joe and Crunchy are sitting in a parked squad car. Joe’s posture and Crunchy’s rapt attention to his phone were designed as illustrative clues. My apologies for missing. I have heightened awareness of the importance of showing my characters wearing seat belts. I used to get it pretty aggressively from smart reader’s back in the 90’s, when I was lax.
Last Rose Of Summer Premium Member over 8 years ago
Wait a minute, look at Joe, do you suppose……..nah
Michie Z Premium Member over 8 years ago
Me, too !!
Last Rose Of Summer Premium Member over 8 years ago
Talk about “tangled webs”!
amaryllis2 Premium Member over 8 years ago
No seatbelts?
robbarmstrong Premium Member over 8 years ago
@amaryllis2 I attempted to make it visually clear that Joe and Crunchy are sitting in a parked squad car. Joe’s posture and Crunchy’s rapt attention to his phone were designed as illustrative clues. My apologies for missing. I have heightened awareness of the importance of showing my characters wearing seat belts. I used to get it pretty aggressively from smart reader’s back in the 90’s, when I was lax.
Phatts over 8 years ago
I don’t know what any of you guys are thinking, but whatever it is, you’re probably wrong.
Tha_Hype over 8 years ago
If they’re thinking what I’m thinking, then I’m thinking we are right and it will be interesting to see how it plays out.
bookdoc123 over 8 years ago
So could it be that Ruth’s husband is Ray Sr? Or is this a spoiler?