Monty by Jim Meddick for November 23, 2014

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Hey... I need your input... I'm working on a children's book trying to make Thanksgiving a more kid friendly holiday... Christmas has Santa Claus. Easter has the Easter Bunny... And now Thanksgiving has... Tommy the magic turkey! Tommy lives on a wonderful free range, totally organic farm where he makes cool toys n stuff with his Piglet helpers. The family in my story decorates a Thanksgiving rock which looks a lot like Plymouth Rock, only it's small enough to roll into their living room... Then on Thanksgiving morning the kids come down to find that Tommy visited in the night and placed toys all around the Thanksgiving rock! I'm having trouble with the ending though... It's kind of a downer when Tommy gets roasted and eat... Maybe if you made the rotisserie look more like a carousel...