Fun, alright, but I don’t think Ruthie’s teacher will like it…
I see a run-on sentence. Otherwise It’s a neat story for a kid to write. It’s probably better than any I tried to write.
“sentence”.
I used to take my 20 spelling words, when we were told to use them in a sentence, and make one long run-on sentence using all of them. It never made sense, but it sure was stimulating.
Sounds like a Hallmark movie. :)
And that’s how writers are born!
Ruthie, I love have you make a story out of 3 words. Great reading.
Ruthie should enter that in the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest, but leave out “the end”.
Argythree about 6 years ago
Fun, alright, but I don’t think Ruthie’s teacher will like it…
wiatr about 6 years ago
I see a run-on sentence. Otherwise It’s a neat story for a kid to write. It’s probably better than any I tried to write.
Skeptical Meg about 6 years ago
“sentence”.
davidlwashburn about 6 years ago
I used to take my 20 spelling words, when we were told to use them in a sentence, and make one long run-on sentence using all of them. It never made sense, but it sure was stimulating.
Saturday's Child about 6 years ago
Sounds like a Hallmark movie. :)
Jayneknox about 6 years ago
And that’s how writers are born!
kab2rb about 6 years ago
Ruthie, I love have you make a story out of 3 words. Great reading.
Sue G about 6 years ago
Ruthie should enter that in the Bulwer-Lytton Fiction Contest, but leave out “the end”.