Best Jailbirds yet, 6/ Number 3, love the new av, makes you look mature and mysterious/ Today’s strip could have been good, but, the execution ruined it… it’s too obvious that Chalkie and Andy weren’t listening ( they telegraphed the punchline again); i’m just an amateur cartoonist, but, even I know that this would have worked a LOT better if Andy and Chalkie had looked as if they were listening intently, THEN let it be known that they weren’t! (Had they done it that way, it would be a 7, but, telegraphing the joke makes it a 4.5/10!)
Best Jailbirds yet, 6/ Number 3, love the new av, makes you look mature and mysterious/ Today’s strip could have been good, but, the execution ruined it… it’s too obvious that Chalkie and Andy weren’t listening ( they telegraphed the punchline again); i’m just an amateur cartoonist, but, even I know that this would have worked a LOT better if Andy and Chalkie had looked as if they were listening intently, THEN let it be known that they weren’t! (Had they done it that way, it would be a 7, but, telegraphing the joke makes it a 4.5/10!)