Bad writing. “[G]rabbed him…with a death-grip” is redundant.
I can relate. I just restarted a big piece I’m writing.
Don’t give up your day job.
Not the Smartest Man On the Planet -- Maybe Close Premium Member over 9 years ago
Bad writing. “[G]rabbed him…with a death-grip” is redundant.
rgcviper over 9 years ago
I can relate. I just restarted a big piece I’m writing.
gammaguy over 9 years ago
Don’t give up your day job.