Lay Lines by Carol Lay for October 16, 2015

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    mr_sherman Premium Member about 9 years ago

    Great Story, Carol.

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    Lensmaker Premium Member about 9 years ago

    Really enjoyed this story, good job

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    Ida No  about 9 years ago

    And if they’re assassins, they’ll leave a part that shows up on x-rays.

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    Dragoncat  about 9 years ago

    Love love love a good story. This is one good story.Keep on writing!

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    CeeJay  about 9 years ago

    Thanks for the wonderful story!

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    Peam Premium Member about 9 years ago

    Lovely story (and artwork); thank you. Really looking forward to the next one – after the weekend’s shorts!

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    NWdryad  about 9 years ago

    @TSOJ: Hah LOL

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    NWdryad  about 9 years ago

    You know, it’s hard to believe he is an ex-Mafioso don. And Antonia a Mafioso wife. But I love the contradiction, it is what makes this family so unique and lovable. Hard for me to explain.

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    carollay creator about 9 years ago

    Thanks, all!

    Next up: a “back cover” for this story posts tomorrow (Kindle version available soon, I hope), and then “A Farewell to Armories” starts on Sunday, which is actually the 2nd Murderville story, even though the cover says #1. I’m confused. I did this story for a Kickstarter campaign and will present it here with naughty bits covered up and adult language toned down.

    A new Murderville story (in progress) will start Nov. 22

    Thanks for reading! And thanks to You-Know-Who-You-Are for Patreon support!

    —carol

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    jopfef  about 9 years ago

    What a beautiful ending to a wonderful story! :-)

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    ineza Premium Member about 9 years ago

    ….Always wanting more… Great story! Thanks laylines.

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    Pedmar Premium Member about 9 years ago

    I enjoyed this one much better than the previous one!

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