Haiku saddens me,Rhyme and rhythm lacking hereToo easy to do.
Millie’s words are strangeBut to her they make good senseHer special wisdom.
Constructing a verse,Bad, corny puns I eschewGesundheit! (wipe, wipe)
Just say what you meanAnd mean what you say.You like dirt.The American Way.
Millie makes great sense.What could be more naturalThan eating plain dirt?
Dana Simpson
October 18, 2013
Robert Nowall Premium Member over 9 years ago
Haiku saddens me,Rhyme and rhythm lacking hereToo easy to do.
Hag5000 over 9 years ago
Millie’s words are strangeBut to her they make good senseHer special wisdom.
Ermine Notyours over 9 years ago
Constructing a verse,Bad, corny puns I eschewGesundheit! (wipe, wipe)
Vet Premium Member over 9 years ago
Just say what you meanAnd mean what you say.You like dirt.The American Way.
R.U. Kidding over 9 years ago
Millie makes great sense.What could be more naturalThan eating plain dirt?