Heart of the City by Steenz for September 01, 2016
August 31, 2016
September 02, 2016
Transcript:
Ode to my summer ending, part three: the me I like staying up late to watch tv and brushing my teeth just once a week. Don't comb my hair, don't wash my face. This is me, the summer freak! now I'm back on schedule, waking to the clock. Clean myself, preen myself. This is me mom likes to see...this schooltime monster schlock. -Heart
Templo S.U.D. about 8 years ago
fi she wants to be a celebrity, Heart will have to bathe and brush each day
fuzzbucket Premium Member about 8 years ago
She’ll do well in English, but maybe not in Health.
bigcatbusiness about 8 years ago
Those are some nice rhymes there. I could take notes… yet again, teachers never asks us to write how summer went here. They just go straight to the class.
ACK! Premium Member about 8 years ago
I frankly doubt that more than a very small minority of students of her age, or any really these days, could write something like this without a single misspelling.
Chris Kenworthy about 8 years ago
I dunno, some of the rhyme structure seems jarring to me here… I find ‘face’ doesn’t fit as I was expecting that to at least be a near-rhyme for “tv”… sorry to nitpick. ;)
hcarpenter1 about 8 years ago
oh well shit happens kid.
Comic Minister Premium Member about 8 years ago
I see now.
sjsczurek about 8 years ago
XD)))))
craigwestlake about 8 years ago
On the other hand, if she doesn’t bathe and brush for a week at a time she WILL get noticed…
Decepticomic over 3 years ago
I’m having some trouble following the rhyming scheme here.