Heart of the City by Steenz for October 21, 2017

The first draft?! Are you daft, lad?!

This storyline was fantastic. I’ll never watch “The Empire Strikes Back” again without thinking of Tweekie.

As for the wampa…I think we actually saw him again in the followup book to The Children of The Jedi (can’t remember the title to the followup). Luke is trying to help his new girlfriend – his body-dead, Jedi of the old Order, lived for 30 years as a Force-entity in a computer on board an Imperial weapons platform, now living in the body of one of Luke’s students (who is dead herself, gone to be with her late boyfriend (another student of Luke’s who died of some disease and she tried to keep him alive by copying his brain patterns to a droid body – but then she realized he wasn’t real) so she has no use for her body anymore), but can’t seem to use the Force anymore because the polarity of her spirit & the dead student’s body cancel each other out, except that she can use the Dark Side…Anyway, Luke is trying to help her regain use of the light side of the Force, so he takes her away from all the resources he has at the Jedi Academy and goes on a pilgrimage of all the places that were touchstones in developing HIS ability with the force. Which includes the ruins of rebel base on Hoth – and a rematch with the Wampa.

But I thought. Heart was a fan now thanks to The Force Awakens and Rogue One! I guess she’s one of those band wagon jumpers.

Well, if you only came on board for the Force Awakens and Rogue One and never saw the earlier films, you WOULDN’T know about wampas and tauntans!

With the main charactor dead there’s no chance for a series

In unused footage we were shown wampa’s digging in the ice to get into the Rebel Base and they make it out when the Empire arrives. Some Snow-troopers are killed.

Well, it is better than Episodes I – III.

Seriously Heart, get better standards.