Heart of the City by Steenz for November 17, 2018
Transcript:
heart: Maybe you're right, maybe I should try out for "suessical the musical". it might be fun making kids laugh at the same silly rhymes i loved so much. heart: Thanks, rand! you opened my eyes! i hope I see you again! dr. suess: hey, you know where you can always find me!
Nachikethass about 6 years ago
Back home, Heart? In all senses, I suppose! And shows her heart is in the right place!
Templo S.U.D. about 6 years ago
well, that was a fine dream I s’pose
asrialfeeple about 6 years ago
Thanks to Rand
Who sleeps in the sand
Dr. Seuss is no longer bland
Heart is getting smart
And sees that performing Seuss is an art
Now Heart needs to pray
She’ll get a role in the play
Katsuro Premium Member almost 6 years ago
I like all the poetry comments, but man
Please try to make sure that your poem will scan.
Before you post something, make sure that you count
the syllables, and then correct their amount.
If you have to many or you have to few
or emphasize ones that you shouldn’t, then do
look over your poem and remedy that.
‘Cause thoughtful revision, man, is where it’s at.
Teto85 Premium Member almost 6 years ago
Heart, don’t be a silly goose, try out for the play that’s all about Seuss.
Moon57Shine almost 6 years ago
I had a feeling that she was going to change her mind, but something tells me that she’s too late in trying out for the play.
Decepticomic over 3 years ago
If this was just an elaborate advertisement for Dr. Seuss, I’m never trusting comic strips again.