“Why is the water warmer around that bird? And why is it a bit yellow?”
Not bad, Toth, but the third, fourth, and fifth lines don’t scan correctly. There are far too many syllables in the third and fifth lines, and the fourth line puts the wrong accent on “Dollars” if read in strict iambic pentameter rhythm.
I’m glad we got that cleared up.
LOL,nice.
The ankh on the mortarboard tassel is a very nice touch.
Oh come on Neptune are you going to get that fussy with the sperm whale’s?
Don’t drink the water: fish pee in it
There’s no “P” in Ocean; let’s keep it that way…
—Measured in parts per billion, to be sure, but still, I kinda agree with Lord Neptune….
And yet, there are still people who are willing to buy a drink at a Bar built in the middle of a Swimming Pool.
Yes. Vacation Hotels sometimes Do That.
RAGs almost 5 years ago
“Why is the water warmer around that bird? And why is it a bit yellow?”
LeeCox almost 5 years ago
Not bad, Toth, but the third, fourth, and fifth lines don’t scan correctly. There are far too many syllables in the third and fifth lines, and the fourth line puts the wrong accent on “Dollars” if read in strict iambic pentameter rhythm.
Weakstream almost 5 years ago
I’m glad we got that cleared up.
Willywise52 Premium Member almost 5 years ago
LOL,nice.
prrdh almost 5 years ago
The ankh on the mortarboard tassel is a very nice touch.
Odd Dog Premium Member almost 5 years ago
Oh come on Neptune are you going to get that fussy with the sperm whale’s?
trimguy almost 5 years ago
Don’t drink the water: fish pee in it
craigwestlake almost 5 years ago
There’s no “P” in Ocean; let’s keep it that way…
Sisyphos almost 5 years ago
—Measured in parts per billion, to be sure, but still, I kinda agree with Lord Neptune….
bakana almost 5 years ago
And yet, there are still people who are willing to buy a drink at a Bar built in the middle of a Swimming Pool.
Yes. Vacation Hotels sometimes Do That.