You could stand to get some writing advice
from an author of bad shipping fiction.
Millie’s line in panel 2 does not scan.
It may be a matter of delivery or pronunciation, but I just can’t hear the beats in my head. Maybe my tin ear is worse than I thought.
Millie is enjoying this arc way too much.
These are great! So fun.
Dana Simpson
October 18, 2013
Averagemoe 10 months ago
You could stand to get some writing advice
from an author of bad shipping fiction.
Uncle Kenny 10 months ago
Millie’s line in panel 2 does not scan.
eddi-TBH 10 months ago
It may be a matter of delivery or pronunciation, but I just can’t hear the beats in my head. Maybe my tin ear is worse than I thought.
Nuke Road Warrior 10 months ago
Millie is enjoying this arc way too much.
delennwen 10 months ago
These are great! So fun.