There’s a reason he’s calling it a hot mess, it’s because she wrote about wanting a cat, and since Nate has Ailurophobia ( fear of cats ), and the fact that Nate’s a dog person. Now this is my basing, but the message here is that Nate is trying to make Lily consider getting a dog, and not a cat, so in turn, will make Nate satisfied. but we all know, mostly anything will not go in favor of Nate’s way.
Kids need to be taught how to peer edit. You cant just throw a paper at them and say “critique”. That is a high school skill. Good grief, what a hot mess that teacher’s classroom will be!
Whoever is reviewing Nate’s story should write “DUMPSTER FIRE” at the top, and then pass it around to the whole class and get everyone to do the same or write something similar.
Cynic 8 months ago
I doubt Nate’s is any better
Blitzo (the o is silent) 8 months ago
So Nate is THIS silly so he can think that Lily will thank him for calling her story a hot mess? Lol
Mono_Matt_36 8 months ago
There’s a reason he’s calling it a hot mess, it’s because she wrote about wanting a cat, and since Nate has Ailurophobia ( fear of cats ), and the fact that Nate’s a dog person. Now this is my basing, but the message here is that Nate is trying to make Lily consider getting a dog, and not a cat, so in turn, will make Nate satisfied. but we all know, mostly anything will not go in favor of Nate’s way.
dlkrueger33 8 months ago
Writing “a hot mess” is not critiquing. Of course, he’s a kid and I’m sure HIS essay is a hot mess. Wonder who is critiquing HIS?
Goat from PBS 8 months ago
Yeah, keep telling yourself that, Nate.
B@+m@n007 8 months ago
6/10, I bet your story isn’t any better, Nate!
raybarb44 8 months ago
Critique is an art. Must give credit for the good stuff and also show how to improve the overall project….
Freeze Ninja 8 months ago
HOUT MSEE
Drbarb71 Premium Member 8 months ago
Kids need to be taught how to peer edit. You cant just throw a paper at them and say “critique”. That is a high school skill. Good grief, what a hot mess that teacher’s classroom will be!
STUFF ENJOYER 8 months ago
She will not thank you. She will hate you.
snowedin, now known as Missy's mom 8 months ago
I can’t stand the smug look that Nate gets on occasion. UGH!
BiggerNate91 8 months ago
Whoever is reviewing Nate’s story should write “DUMPSTER FIRE” at the top, and then pass it around to the whole class and get everyone to do the same or write something similar.
Mike Baldwin creator 8 months ago
He had me as hot,thought lily.
bread (another comic reviewer) 8 months ago
this definetly feels like a rerun i dont really like it 1/5
Random_commenter36564 8 months ago
Nate is just plain stupid
YouSless Premium Member 8 months ago
Hi everyone! Ed Sheeran here. I am returning to just say my birthday was yesterday!
!!!! 6 months ago
Nate has become Adrian Monk. Please tell me you people know who that is, and why I said that…????