^Mum’s the word. By the way John, I keep saying Lila would be brilliant as a personal shopper. She was born for it and would be top of the profession. I know these are all reboots, but wouldn’t it be fun to take it in a direction where Lila is thriving in her natural environment? Heck, her shoe blog alone ought to be making her a bundle in advertising – I bet she gets a lot of traffic. Just musing out loud, so to speak.
The problem encountered in proofreading is that the writer tends to ‘read’ what he intended to write, instead of what he actually wrote. Maybe JWF ‘saw’ the mouth, and all other facial features, even when something was missing.In this respect, someone else should proof it—no guarantee the proofer will catch everything.We writers usually set our project aside for a while (weeks or months, if it’s a book), so we can approach the proofreading with a ‘clearer’ mindset.
Need a roommate, Lila? I’ve still got a job, such as it is, and can help out with the rent and food. I’m afraid the terrible credit card debt will be doubled though.
Phatts over 10 years ago
Two words …bankrupcy
cdward over 10 years ago
Two word: homeless shelter.
JWF Premium Member over 10 years ago
No mouth on Boyd this time. What is my problem with mouths? I keep forgetting them. I hope it isn’t Freudian…
cdward over 10 years ago
^Mum’s the word. By the way John, I keep saying Lila would be brilliant as a personal shopper. She was born for it and would be top of the profession. I know these are all reboots, but wouldn’t it be fun to take it in a direction where Lila is thriving in her natural environment? Heck, her shoe blog alone ought to be making her a bundle in advertising – I bet she gets a lot of traffic. Just musing out loud, so to speak.
karanne over 10 years ago
Nice to see Lila in a different top, although how can they afford to keep eating out?
I agree with cdward, she’s born to be a personal shopper.
JWF Premium Member over 10 years ago
LOL on the top. Personal shopper? Interesting. I just wonder if she has the drive to be in her own business ;-)
billdi Premium Member over 10 years ago
true that
skeeterhawk over 10 years ago
The problem encountered in proofreading is that the writer tends to ‘read’ what he intended to write, instead of what he actually wrote. Maybe JWF ‘saw’ the mouth, and all other facial features, even when something was missing.In this respect, someone else should proof it—no guarantee the proofer will catch everything.We writers usually set our project aside for a while (weeks or months, if it’s a book), so we can approach the proofreading with a ‘clearer’ mindset.
ChrisV over 10 years ago
Need a roommate, Lila? I’ve still got a job, such as it is, and can help out with the rent and food. I’m afraid the terrible credit card debt will be doubled though.