When looking at it with a fresh eye this morning, in the small size of print in the newspaper, I realized that it was a bit too obtuse. I should’ve given more information, like having the two characters yell, “HEY! ARE YOU GONNA PICK THAT UP?!”. I always aim for subtly, but sometimes my aim is off.
When looking at it with a fresh eye this morning, in the small size of print in the newspaper, I realized that it was a bit too obtuse. I should’ve given more information, like having the two characters yell, “HEY! ARE YOU GONNA PICK THAT UP?!”. I always aim for subtly, but sometimes my aim is off.