Hey, storywirters, when you write one of the most important parts of your story, does your heart beat? Mine does.
WoI: The biggest. Adventure. Ever. – Part 5a (written with Wizard’s perspective)
I suddenly felt a pain in my head. I wasn’t hearing anything, and everyone – the Huns, Blanche, Bung and Rodney – were fading away.When I opened my eyes, I saw nothing, but an empty space. I also saw a woman. I asked: “Wh… Who are you?” “I’m Sarah, the fortuneteller of Id”, the woman answered. “I tried to contact with you, to tell you really important news”.“Okay, what’s going on?” “The Huns hadn’t kidnap lady Gwen”. “WHAT?! That’s impossible!” “But it’s true.” “Then, who did this?!” “The two of the king’s guard did this.” “But… HOW COME it happened?!” “The king told them to do this. He wanted them, to lock her in a tower. Then, he sent Duke to rescue her, becuasehe wanted them to marry each other.”“Then, why he sent US first?!”
Hey, storywirters, when you write one of the most important parts of your story, does your heart beat? Mine does.
WoI: The biggest. Adventure. Ever. – Part 5a (written with Wizard’s perspective)
I suddenly felt a pain in my head. I wasn’t hearing anything, and everyone – the Huns, Blanche, Bung and Rodney – were fading away.When I opened my eyes, I saw nothing, but an empty space. I also saw a woman. I asked: “Wh… Who are you?” “I’m Sarah, the fortuneteller of Id”, the woman answered. “I tried to contact with you, to tell you really important news”.“Okay, what’s going on?” “The Huns hadn’t kidnap lady Gwen”. “WHAT?! That’s impossible!” “But it’s true.” “Then, who did this?!” “The two of the king’s guard did this.” “But… HOW COME it happened?!” “The king told them to do this. He wanted them, to lock her in a tower. Then, he sent Duke to rescue her, becuasehe wanted them to marry each other.”“Then, why he sent US first?!”
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