Agnes by Tony Cochran for November 20, 2012

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    David Huie Green LoveJoyAndPeace  almost 12 years ago

    everything needs an expiration date.

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member almost 12 years ago

    When Agnes is a 22 year-old performance artist living in an old school bus with no running water, and Trout says she heard Bob’s software company was just awarded a government contract worth millions..

    she’ll be searching her 2nd-hand, 5-year-old laptop for the “unspurn” key.

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    QuietStorm27  almost 12 years ago

    He might be your only chance Agnes.

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    Stephen Gilberg  almost 12 years ago

    What does she have against him, anyway? His lack of hair?

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    Uskoke  almost 12 years ago

    A lover spurned, a lesson learned…

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member almost 12 years ago

    Frugal…

    Aw…. shucks. blush…Thanks.

    But… hey… I don’t think you want to look into my mind…. It’s dusty and disorderly and absolutely stuffed with mismatched things….

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member almost 12 years ago

    Anyhow…. I don’t see Agnes as spurning everybody….yet.

    At this age, she still desperately wants to be popular and admired, even though if she became such, I think she’d soon feel stifled.

    She’s got nothing to worry about on that last score though cos no one except Trout talks to her.

    And in spite of Ms. Newman’s usual dour take on their relationship, the two of them have a very tight bond.They’re merely at an age when ALL emotions are embarrassing…. Did you never, in pre-adolescence, hate it if your mother hugged you, or say you’d NEVER love your sister….So their friendship, too, is expressed in sarcasm and digs.

    Agnes doesn’t hate Bob. She’s embarrassed cos he likes her;in some complicated way, she’s also convinced he must be a pariah, cos nobody socially acceptable could like her….

    And she derives her only source of social power by spurning the ONE person she thinks might be “beneath” her…(Mostly because he’s willing to like her. )

    Inside, she’s a bit proud of his attention…and maybe even attracted….which she’s too young to handle.

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    Jeff0811  almost 12 years ago

    In the words of Joe Pesci, “Were you talkin’ to me? You must be talkin’ to me because I’m the only one here."

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    Hunter7  almost 12 years ago

    …. that and that Bob will for now, not give up on Agnes. While at 22 she’s looking for the unspurn key, he’s across the street, sipping an Uber type café, hoping for a glimpse of his true love.

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    Tony Cochran  almost 12 years ago

    On the money,Susan.Amazing.

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