The Buckets by Greg Cravens for October 13, 2016
Transcript:
How's your poetry coming? I have written a haiku, about bees. I see. Toby, why not write about your favorite thing you learned? You know that soaring feeling you get when you discover some wisdom, or meaning? Right about the sense of off when you awake to a new truth! Yeah! Like when I first tried mushrooms on pizza, and they were good! Lemme see the haiku again.
Tue Elung-Jensen over 8 years ago
Some time the simple things are lifes greatest pleasures.
Liverlips McCracken Premium Member over 8 years ago
I think a haiku about bees sounds like a good response.
Doctor Toon over 8 years ago
Hard to write about things you don’t know about, the very concept of the "Joy of Learning is lost on Toby
car2ner over 8 years ago
I think I’d like Toby’s poem best
barister over 8 years ago
Yeah, like there is no Santa Claus.
starcandles Premium Member over 8 years ago
She is beginning to get a little pushy!
Wendy Murray Premium Member over 8 years ago
She’s going to make someone a bossy wife someday.
Roger Merritt over 8 years ago
It’s hard to soar with the eagles when you spend all day on the ground scratchin’ with the chickens.
morningglory73 Premium Member over 8 years ago
I wonder when she will get tired of trying to broaden his horizons?
PoodleGroomer over 8 years ago
Just five, seven, five. Syllables per line of thought. Condense metaphors.
Number Three over 8 years ago
This should be interesting.
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RWill over 8 years ago
Toby’s haiku—just a guess:
Bzzz bzzz bzzz bzzz bzzz bzzz bzzz
Bzzz bzzz bzzz bzzz bzzz
Thomas & Tifffany Connolly over 8 years ago
Consider wellthe person before theeis he deep or shallowthe response you will receive.
LaughedMyselfFuzzy over 8 years ago
Toby is dating a mini-adult……
rgcviper over 8 years ago
Maybe Toby should check out “Haiku Ewe” here on GoComics for inspiration …
http://www.gocomics.com/haikuewe