Remember Calvin as Tracer Bullet?
That’s AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
Skewed, very skewed, but I agree with Yakety, AWESOME!
Better than those rewrites you see at the movie theaters…
“melted cheddar on a quarter pounder” now that is a “look”
More angles than Euclid’s notebook? Math geeks are smiling today.
“map and a calendar”. HA!
I’d like some more, please.
I thought it was a well written story. Rick should write a book.
Brilliant!
T. L.? Tina Louise… ☺
That was great! Can’t wait to see the rest of the story.
Yes dad is creative on his stories, thought Ruthie would recognize the main character.
Outstanding! Brilliant take on noir
I like the dad’s version much better.
Johnny Q Premium Member over 1 year ago
Remember Calvin as Tracer Bullet?
Yakety Sax over 1 year ago
That’s AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
bryce.gear over 1 year ago
Skewed, very skewed, but I agree with Yakety, AWESOME!
jagedlo over 1 year ago
Better than those rewrites you see at the movie theaters…
bobpickett1 over 1 year ago
“melted cheddar on a quarter pounder” now that is a “look”
WaitingMan over 1 year ago
More angles than Euclid’s notebook? Math geeks are smiling today.
Milady Meg over 1 year ago
“map and a calendar”. HA!
Judeeye Premium Member over 1 year ago
I’d like some more, please.
flemmingo over 1 year ago
I thought it was a well written story. Rick should write a book.
gigagrouch over 1 year ago
Brilliant!
ChessPirate over 1 year ago
T. L.? Tina Louise… ☺
hitek1st over 1 year ago
That was great! Can’t wait to see the rest of the story.
kab2rb over 1 year ago
Yes dad is creative on his stories, thought Ruthie would recognize the main character.
Brent Rosenthal Premium Member over 1 year ago
Outstanding! Brilliant take on noir
momofalex7 over 1 year ago
I like the dad’s version much better.