By the way, where does One-Eye get his clothes? And does he own a red outfit as well as his black outfit? Although, there must be two of each color, I’d guess.
Panel 3: One-eye’s decided that if this whole ‘crooked casino manager’ thing falls through, he’ll take up a job as a Kabuki actor. He already has the outlandish costuming down. Also, how large-scale is your plan if, once complete, it won’t matter that you hit a cop over the head? Are you planning to take over the world or what?
kerowack, when you do your version of DT, don’t alter the storyline—such as it is—just act as if you are the cartoonist, not the writer.
use your own version as to how the story is presented, like different poses, views or character placement
you’ll probably find you will be putting more time into it than you thought, if you get into an extensive rework.
It would be great to see a comparison of just the artwork itself, showing a better grasp of human anatomy, consistency and perspective than the current strip producers.
By the way, where does One-Eye get his clothes? And does he own a red outfit as well as his black outfit? Although, there must be two of each color, I’d guess.
HankF says: “By the way, where does One-Eye get his clothes? And does he own a red outfit as well as his black outfit? Although, there must be two of each color, I’d guess.”
I’m gonna go out on a limb here and suggest One-Eye’s tailor is the same as Chairman Kaga on “Iron Chef.”
margueritem over 15 years ago
Nice knockout in panel 1. I sincerely hope that the plan improves over what it appears to be right now…
LudwigVonDrake over 15 years ago
Are we sure that’s a bottle and not a bowling pin with a label?
HankF over 15 years ago
By the way, where does One-Eye get his clothes? And does he own a red outfit as well as his black outfit? Although, there must be two of each color, I’d guess.
bassmanbob over 15 years ago
Tracy - 1st panel “Ahhh So! Me feel sudden pain on top head. EiiYaa! Where little grasshopper when me need him? Me hungry for some frie Lice!
avatarjk137 over 15 years ago
That’s terrifically offensive, bassman.
Panel 3: One-eye’s decided that if this whole ‘crooked casino manager’ thing falls through, he’ll take up a job as a Kabuki actor. He already has the outlandish costuming down. Also, how large-scale is your plan if, once complete, it won’t matter that you hit a cop over the head? Are you planning to take over the world or what?
bassmanbob over 15 years ago
Thanks avatarjk137. I worked hard at it! LOL!!
Nighthawks Premium Member over 15 years ago
kerowack, when you do your version of DT, don’t alter the storyline—such as it is—just act as if you are the cartoonist, not the writer. use your own version as to how the story is presented, like different poses, views or character placement you’ll probably find you will be putting more time into it than you thought, if you get into an extensive rework. It would be great to see a comparison of just the artwork itself, showing a better grasp of human anatomy, consistency and perspective than the current strip producers.
good luck!
OneUrantian over 15 years ago
HankF says:
By the way, where does One-Eye get his clothes? And does he own a red outfit as well as his black outfit? Although, there must be two of each color, I’d guess.
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He probably has four “suits”.
mrbribery over 15 years ago
No! Tons shoulda hit Tracy with a POKER!
paul_l_s_1 over 15 years ago
Coat buttoned frame one, unbuttoned frame two!
overtop over 15 years ago
With apologies to the late Jim Croce, Jack’s face in panel 3 looks like a jigsaw puzzle with a couple of pieces gone.
DonnieTevault over 15 years ago
Well, I once had high hopes that this would be a good story. But, no more.
On the bright side, when DT quality deteriorates, the comments get better.
countoftowergrove over 15 years ago
HankF says: “By the way, where does One-Eye get his clothes? And does he own a red outfit as well as his black outfit? Although, there must be two of each color, I’d guess.” I’m gonna go out on a limb here and suggest One-Eye’s tailor is the same as Chairman Kaga on “Iron Chef.”