Yes, Six, that is much better rhyming… A limerick depends on its timing..You can’t rhyme just “sorta”And if possible you ortaBe sure that the focus is climbing.
Thanks, Six….Not trying to “win,” or criticise, or drag anybody into any murky holes… just to have a little fun. I’ve been writing limericks for most of my life, and I like them.
And now a song he hums as the elevator descends……..“Working in a Coal mine going down down…Working in a Coal mine….WHEW about to slip down.”“Five o’clock in the morning….I’m up before the sun…..when my work day is over……I’m too tired for having fun.” Lee Dorsey….great cover by DEVO!!
Wilde Bill about 8 years ago
Down and out.
x_Tech about 8 years ago
Leo’s sales pitch was not well received
Farside99 about 8 years ago
The boss and his cat were not amused.
Espoc about 8 years ago
Red dots are back?
Liverlips McCracken Premium Member about 8 years ago
I think I’ll take the stairs, if it’s all the same to you.
pcolli about 8 years ago
“Let me take you down, ‘cos I’m going to………”
SusanSunshine Premium Member about 8 years ago
Leo has already gone down….in flames.So to speak.
No. Six:
Yes, Six, that is much better rhyming… A limerick depends on its timing..You can’t rhyme just “sorta”And if possible you ortaBe sure that the focus is climbing.
SusanSunshine Premium Member about 8 years ago
Thanks, Six….Not trying to “win,” or criticise, or drag anybody into any murky holes… just to have a little fun. I’ve been writing limericks for most of my life, and I like them.
Linguist about 8 years ago
Here’s to ole Number SixA poet of great limericksWe all love his witthat he always sees fit To conform to the theme of the comics !
Linguist about 8 years ago
Leo should know by now that arguments with Tania “Talons” Tudberry always end badly.
Perkycat about 8 years ago
Funny comic and I love all the comments!
ekke about 8 years ago
Looks like it already went down.
Vet Premium Member about 8 years ago
And now a song he hums as the elevator descends……..“Working in a Coal mine going down down…Working in a Coal mine….WHEW about to slip down.”“Five o’clock in the morning….I’m up before the sun…..when my work day is over……I’m too tired for having fun.” Lee Dorsey….great cover by DEVO!!
Thomas & Tifffany Connolly about 8 years ago
Thank you, Captain Obvious!
diesel turtle about 8 years ago
I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall when this went down.