So she started by drawing herself smiling, then frowning, then shrugging, and didn’t come up with the words until after that? It sure is convenient that she had something fitting.
I would love to hear every one’s story for finishing “One day she…” for some reason the 1st thing that popped in my head was “Exploded” "One day she exploded. Then she exploded again. Then she was gone. The end. " I don’t know why my brain went there but it did and now she did. So who can do better?
…was trying to make an autobiography-comic strip of herself, and did make progress despite distractions by her egotistical Uni-BFF. Phoebe drew up some nice artwork for it, but then in a sudden moment of realization came to a complete stop in her tracks, stared at the paper for several seconds, then…"
When I was in Junior High. I created 2 characters called “Patch & Sue,” drew them over and over…and then realized that I had no idea what to do with them.
Hello,I just finished a 3-day binge on your comic, after having seen a few of your books at the library. So thank you for giving us free comics – YEA! I haven’t smiled this much in a long time.
Well, since its an autobiographical comic, it would start with her hitting Marigold with a rock. What I would do is for the second panel, leave it as it is. For the third panel put “…Hit something with a rock” For the fourth panel, I would put “She didn’t know what it was”
TheBetterYouTuberNamedLogan over 3 years ago
OMG Phoebe got a syndicated strip when she was only a child!
Antiyonder over 3 years ago
I don’t know. It’s pretty close to the Marvel Method isn’t it?:-D
Averagemoe over 3 years ago
So she started by drawing herself smiling, then frowning, then shrugging, and didn’t come up with the words until after that? It sure is convenient that she had something fitting.
codycab over 3 years ago
So far, so good.
Concretionist over 3 years ago
Plot: It’s not JUST where you bury Grandma.
linus82 over 3 years ago
Phoebe could inspire in John Lennon’s The Daily Howl
Templo S.U.D. over 3 years ago
off to a fine start after just hitting the rut in the road
kaykeyser over 3 years ago
I would love to hear every one’s story for finishing “One day she…” for some reason the 1st thing that popped in my head was “Exploded” "One day she exploded. Then she exploded again. Then she was gone. The end. " I don’t know why my brain went there but it did and now she did. So who can do better?
Damaged over 3 years ago
This is getting a bit meta.
Enter.Name.Here over 3 years ago
“One day she….
…was trying to make an autobiography-comic strip of herself, and did make progress despite distractions by her egotistical Uni-BFF. Phoebe drew up some nice artwork for it, but then in a sudden moment of realization came to a complete stop in her tracks, stared at the paper for several seconds, then…"
Troglodyte over 3 years ago
Not exactly off to a galloping start, eh Phoebe? :D
some idiot from R'lyeh Premium Member over 3 years ago
Heh, that never stopped [REDACTED].
Aladar30 Premium Member over 3 years ago
I like Phoebe’s ambition.
salenstormwing over 3 years ago
Still a better comic than Dilbert.
scyphi26 over 3 years ago
That is good advice, yes.
Jayneknox over 3 years ago
When I was in Junior High. I created 2 characters called “Patch & Sue,” drew them over and over…and then realized that I had no idea what to do with them.
P-oh-Tate-oh over 3 years ago
moral of story: think of ur story before you write it. otherwise ur just wasting paper
glosengeranne over 3 years ago
Hello,I just finished a 3-day binge on your comic, after having seen a few of your books at the library. So thank you for giving us free comics – YEA! I haven’t smiled this much in a long time.
MakiHooves over 3 years ago
That is my problem too
raybarb44 over 3 years ago
That’s one way of doing it….
Stephen Gilberg over 3 years ago
Phoebe, you ought to draw your cute little nose. You don’t want to follow in Cathy’s footsteps.
IDon’tHaveTimeForThat over 3 years ago
Well, since its an autobiographical comic, it would start with her hitting Marigold with a rock. What I would do is for the second panel, leave it as it is. For the third panel put “…Hit something with a rock” For the fourth panel, I would put “She didn’t know what it was”
DanglingModifier over 3 years ago
This is how an uncomfortably large number of webcomics starts
Firestar over 3 years ago
Oof.