Would have better comic pacing if the dialogue from the fourth panel were moved to the fifth panel, so there would be a single silent beat of Jeff holding the man’s beard with the old man looking shocked and speechless, then the old man would only say “Let go of my beard!” once, in the fifth panel, followed by the existing sixth panel. The beat of Jeff’s needing the old man to repeat himself would be eliminated. Shorter, sweeter, and funnier.
BasilBruce about 2 months ago
He should have stood on Mutt’s lap so he could reach a strap.
Izzy Moreno about 2 months ago
No, but he will be, if you continue to pull on it.
owlsandy Premium Member about 2 months ago
Maybe just sit on Mutt’s lap!
brklnbern about 2 months ago
Jeff is a real card.
brklnbern about 2 months ago
Funny, but I’m taking the old man’s side.
Kvetchy Kvaddle about 2 months ago
Would have better comic pacing if the dialogue from the fourth panel were moved to the fifth panel, so there would be a single silent beat of Jeff holding the man’s beard with the old man looking shocked and speechless, then the old man would only say “Let go of my beard!” once, in the fifth panel, followed by the existing sixth panel. The beat of Jeff’s needing the old man to repeat himself would be eliminated. Shorter, sweeter, and funnier.