Everyone’s a critic.
It’s free verse.
Mittens needs to read this at a poetry slam.
Reminds me of an old Laverne and Shirley episode.
Free verse doesn’t always work.
You’ve done much better than that Mittens
Mittens, a beat poet for a new generation.
Maybe it rhymes pretty in Yiddish, we should hope.
#FancyNonRhyme
Hannukah Prose?
Hey Mitty my friend, don’t worry about that,
I can have more than one ‘cos I’m such a good cat.
I’m out with two ladies, when I’ve finished with them,
I’ll be round for my dreidel, I’ll see you at ten!
FreyjaRN Premium Member about 1 year ago
Everyone’s a critic.
Castlemama about 1 year ago
It’s free verse.
cat19632001 about 1 year ago
Mittens needs to read this at a poetry slam.
Queen of America about 1 year ago
Reminds me of an old Laverne and Shirley episode.
ladykat Premium Member about 1 year ago
Free verse doesn’t always work.
SusieB about 1 year ago
You’ve done much better than that Mittens
The Goon Show Premium Member about 1 year ago
Mittens, a beat poet for a new generation.
mistercatworks about 1 year ago
Maybe it rhymes pretty in Yiddish, we should hope.
#FancyNonRhyme
uncle snipe about 1 year ago
Hannukah Prose?
Mountaingreenery about 1 year ago
Hey Mitty my friend, don’t worry about that,
I can have more than one ‘cos I’m such a good cat.
I’m out with two ladies, when I’ve finished with them,
I’ll be round for my dreidel, I’ll see you at ten!
Stumpy.