Everyone’s a critic.
It’s free verse.
Mittens needs to read this at a poetry slam.
Reminds me of an old Laverne and Shirley episode.
Free verse doesn’t always work.
You’ve done much better than that Mittens
Mittens, a beat poet for a new generation.
Maybe it rhymes pretty in Yiddish, we should hope.
#FancyNonRhyme
Hannukah Prose?
Hey Mitty my friend, don’t worry about that,
I can have more than one ‘cos I’m such a good cat.
I’m out with two ladies, when I’ve finished with them,
I’ll be round for my dreidel, I’ll see you at ten!
FreyjaRN Premium Member 12 months ago
Everyone’s a critic.
Castlemama 12 months ago
It’s free verse.
cat19632001 12 months ago
Mittens needs to read this at a poetry slam.
Queen of America 12 months ago
Reminds me of an old Laverne and Shirley episode.
ladykat 12 months ago
Free verse doesn’t always work.
SusieB 12 months ago
You’ve done much better than that Mittens
The Goon Show Premium Member 12 months ago
Mittens, a beat poet for a new generation.
mistercatworks 12 months ago
Maybe it rhymes pretty in Yiddish, we should hope.
#FancyNonRhyme
uncle snipe 12 months ago
Hannukah Prose?
Mountaingreenery 12 months ago
Hey Mitty my friend, don’t worry about that,
I can have more than one ‘cos I’m such a good cat.
I’m out with two ladies, when I’ve finished with them,
I’ll be round for my dreidel, I’ll see you at ten!
Stumpy.