Jef is cryptic as usual: “A World sweeter” suggests Fannie May chocolates. “An investment” brings Fannie Mae to mind (Federal National Mortgage Association (FNMA), commonly known as Fannie Mae). Then there’s Buster Brown’s classic Fannie Mae https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jmt4JBnnOBY, which leads us towards Maggie May https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBlrMtFprKs.
So—I’m new to this and not quite sure—amphibracic trImeter, yes? And catalectic in lines 3, 6, 7, 8 and 9? So Caulfield leaves things just a tish incomplete . .
Very good segue. If the rhyming is most important, he got it, orally, that is. And that’s what most people will hear. The rhyme scheme, while slightly bent is still good, but misspelled, so he loses. He can work out the rhythmic bumps in performance.
Bilan almost 4 years ago
It’s Fannie May when you live downwind of the BBQ Shack.
Concretionist almost 4 years ago
I want to see his ode to Freddie Mac!
Geophyzz almost 4 years ago
Jef is cryptic as usual: “A World sweeter” suggests Fannie May chocolates. “An investment” brings Fannie Mae to mind (Federal National Mortgage Association (FNMA), commonly known as Fannie Mae). Then there’s Buster Brown’s classic Fannie Mae https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jmt4JBnnOBY, which leads us towards Maggie May https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pBlrMtFprKs.
ddjg almost 4 years ago
So—I’m new to this and not quite sure—amphibracic trImeter, yes? And catalectic in lines 3, 6, 7, 8 and 9? So Caulfield leaves things just a tish incomplete . .
Jhony-Yermo almost 4 years ago
Brilliant! Bravo!
sandpiper almost 4 years ago
Very good segue. If the rhyming is most important, he got it, orally, that is. And that’s what most people will hear. The rhyme scheme, while slightly bent is still good, but misspelled, so he loses. He can work out the rhythmic bumps in performance.
R.R.Bedford almost 4 years ago
As long as Caufield does not pinch Mae’s fanny, he remains on semi-stabile ground.
BRBurns1960 almost 4 years ago
And that’s why, Fannie, it’s called May.
Rabbit Brown 2105-30 P coat almost 4 years ago
What’s the price of barley this month?
MITZI almost 4 years ago
Bravo, Jef Mallett!! And for those nostalgic for Broadway shows: https://genius.com/Frederick-loewe-the-lusty-month-of-may-lyrics
Boomer with a view almost 4 years ago
There once was a kid from Nantucket.
asrialfeeple almost 4 years ago
An artist must suffer for his art.
christelisbetty almost 4 years ago
I’m confused, is Fannie Mae controlling the weather now ?
gcarlson almost 4 years ago
SofaKing Premium Member almost 4 years ago
Is Caulfield being sent to the principal every time he’s in the hallway with Frazz?
The Brooklyn Accent Premium Member almost 4 years ago
“And I remember Fannie Mae,
But from where I’m standing now,
Looking at my Fannie may
Remind one of a cow…"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=opCegHWldOM