You can always count on your sister for a mean streak
Then she wads it up and throws it in the trashcan beside her.
Hammie did not really want her opinion anyway!
Is it comedic stupid or stupid stupid?
Amazing?
It’s missing conflict, plot arc, emotional overtones.An example of the shortest story ever eas an ad. “For sale: one pair baby shoes, never worn.”
I would think a scathing review by his sister is just what Hammie would want. Zoe would probably say it doesn’t have enough unicorns and princesses.
Can’t believe that Hammie would seek an opinion from Zoe, knowing it sets the stage for exactly THIS kind of disparagement. Which isn’t to say that what Hammie wrote wasn’t terribly stupid…
Now why would you ask her anything. Ask dad, he’ll either lie or make a joke about it.
Meh … What does she know?
It would be a picture book if Hammie could draw Doug.
January 25, 2022
C about 6 hours ago
You can always count on your sister for a mean streak
Blu Bunny about 6 hours ago
Then she wads it up and throws it in the trashcan beside her.
iggyman about 6 hours ago
Hammie did not really want her opinion anyway!
sirbadger about 6 hours ago
Is it comedic stupid or stupid stupid?
Rhetorical_Question about 5 hours ago
Amazing?
montymiff about 3 hours ago
It’s missing conflict, plot arc, emotional overtones.An example of the shortest story ever eas an ad. “For sale: one pair baby shoes, never worn.”
steveh64 about 2 hours ago
I would think a scathing review by his sister is just what Hammie would want. Zoe would probably say it doesn’t have enough unicorns and princesses.
tremaine53 about 1 hour ago
Can’t believe that Hammie would seek an opinion from Zoe, knowing it sets the stage for exactly THIS kind of disparagement. Which isn’t to say that what Hammie wrote wasn’t terribly stupid…
Huckleberry Hiroshima 42 minutes ago
Now why would you ask her anything. Ask dad, he’ll either lie or make a joke about it.
Doug K 38 minutes ago
Meh … What does she know?
julie.mason1 Premium Member 7 minutes ago
It would be a picture book if Hammie could draw Doug.